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Ouch

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I do hope I've made myself clearer now. --Dweller (talk) 21:34, 4 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

bruv Epigrammed (talk) 19:08, 7 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Horner's?

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A few weeks back, you confirmed that the complaint left on the Horner's Syndrome svg was a valid one. I've since brought the image to the graphics workshop on Commons, but it would really help if you could say what specifically is wrong with the image. Which number is misplaced? Where/what should it be? And could you answer on the workshop page? Thanks. DS (talk) 12:49, 14 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Sigh. Think you could help out some more? DS (talk) 16:36, 24 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Really, I don't know what to say. Could you take over for me on that? Thanks. DS (talk) 23:21, 27 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you

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I wanted to thank you for your edits/help on the cardiomyopathy article (a lot of people "talk" you "help")...oz..--Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 11:47, 21 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

You're welcome! I try to help out with referencing. Axl ¤ [Talk] 13:52, 21 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

thanks Axl, I used this [1] for just one reference...(that's very nice of you)thank you...oz..--Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 10:42, 25 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback on request

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Hi
I need your feedback to be able to complete this request, thanks --Goran tek-en (talk) 16:45, 18 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello hello? You there? wave wave I'm trying to get things sorted out, could you help Goran, please? Thanks. DS (talk) 15:53, 28 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Why revert?

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Hey there, can I ask why you made this change? There is nothing supporting the claim whatsoever. --allthefoxes (Talk) 19:55, 15 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The reference provided is Rosen's Emergency Medicine, 7th edition. I don't currently have access to the 7th edition, but I do have the 8th edition. From the 8th edition, chapter 77, page 988: "The incidence of primary spontaneous pneumothorax is approximately 15 cases per 100,000 population per year among men and 5 cases per 100,000 population per year among women." Axl ¤ [Talk] 22:56, 15 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Yo Ho Ho

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Thanks for all you have done this year :-) Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 22:53, 21 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! And a Merry Christmas to you and your family! Axl ¤ [Talk] 00:47, 22 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Merry Christmas, Axl

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And may your holidays be merry and bright . . . . Cheers. Dirtlawyer1 (talk) 18:09, 22 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Haha, thank you! And Merry Christmas to you too! Axl ¤ [Talk] 23:39, 22 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Happy New Year, Axl!

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Thank you! And Happy New Year to you too! Axl ¤ [Talk] 22:53, 1 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Nomination of Aardwolf (video game) for deletion

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Thank you for supporting my RfA

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Human lightning rod not to scale Brianhe RfA Appreciation award
Thank you for participating at my RfA. Your support was very much appreciated even if I did get a bit scorched. Brianhe (talk) 03:26, 6 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your support

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Peacemaker67 RfA Appreciation award
Thank you for participating and supporting at my RfA. It was very much appreciated, and I am humbled that the community saw fit to trust me with the tools. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 05:07, 6 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Briarcliff Library

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Hi Axl, Thanks for your comments on the Briarcliff Library FAC. I replied to them, care to take a look? Thanks! ɱ (talk · vbm · coi) 21:52, 23 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi again, sorry to bother, but did you have further comments on the rest of my replies on that page? Thank you. ɱ (talk · vbm · coi) 16:45, 27 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much

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Your kind attention to the Neonatal infection is very much appreciated. I am NOT a pulmonary physician and can only admire your expertise. Please feel free to assess any other med articles to which I contribute or create - your skilled eye could only make these articles better. With the Very Best of Regards,

Barbara (WVS) (talk) 17:13, 30 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
You are most welcome! Axl ¤ [Talk] 00:10, 31 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Presentation of Wikipedia

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Hello Axl. I noticed that you made a comment that working on Wikipedia was now difficult due to style and placement changes that have happened. It should be possible to help you by making some changes in your own personal style sheet. That would allow you to have Wikilinks and text in what ever colour you choose. It is also possible to hide useless elements that may get in the way. For example the logo can disappear. I myself have decluttered my experience by hiding some Wikipedia interface links that I never use. Let me know if you are interested. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 05:22, 5 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for offering to help, Graeme. Yes, I am certainly willing to try out your suggestions! (Although I am not optimistic.) Axl ¤ [Talk] 15:42, 5 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]
OK so I need to find out what you want to change. My first question is what skin are you using? I use Monobook, but anything should be customisable. The next question is what do you want to change? For example we can change the colour of Wikilinks (and some others), say to yellow by putting this in the stylesheet: "a { color: #ffff00;}". You can make the Wikipedia logo become invisible with "#p-logo a {background-image:none!important;}" but you may want to do something different like shrink it or move it out of the way. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 11:09, 6 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Precious anniversary

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Four years ago ...
medicine
... you were recipient
no. 307 of Precious,
a prize of QAI!

--Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:03, 17 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! Axl ¤ [Talk] 10:29, 17 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Five years now! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:14, 17 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Hehe, thank you again! Axl ¤ [Talk] 17:29, 17 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
... and six ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:47, 17 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Hehe, six years! Thank you. Axl ¤ [Talk] 13:52, 17 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]
... and seven ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:50, 17 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you, again! Axl ¤ [Talk] 20:02, 17 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Happy Holiday!

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Axl, Happy Holidays/New Year!--Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 13:28, 7 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! Happy Holidays to you and your family too. Axl ¤ [Talk] 17:16, 8 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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I came across the nomination for Boogeyman 2 and found myself quite disgusted by the low bar that was set- it seems like this was closer to GA standards, though I wouldn't have likely endorsed that promotion in itself. After seeing FANs time and time again, I'm a little put off by this one. When you have time, would you like to take a look at this and let me know if this was upheld correctly? I'm unsure if it is actually below par or if I'm simply disenchanted from past experiences. DARTHBOTTO talkcont 20:21, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, DarthBotto. While I do still undertake FAC reviews, I am rather busy at the moment. Indeed I am currently in the process of an FAC review, and my review is already proceeding far too slowly. Unfortunately I don't have the time to inspect Boogeyman 2. Sorry. Axl ¤ [Talk] 11:46, 2 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks!

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Hey thanks for the Barnstar (my first ever)! I do experience Imposter syndrome, however, as most of the work really is user:Kelson's (he's the one doing all the coding, along with a few others) :-) But if you ever get to use the app (or another one), feel free to let us know how we could/should improve it: actionable user feedback is always welcome. Best, Stephane (Kiwix) (talk) 13:03, 24 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Can we finish

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this request Horner's syndrome. I know it wasn't you who started this but you have helped me. I can't complete it without your help. --Goran tek-en (talk) 16:23, 3 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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References

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There are some concerns about my use of a source for content on vaginal epithelium. In hopes to declutter the talk page of the article, here are the references that I am using to support the content describing the multi-layered vaginal epithelium. I want to post it on the talk page, but hesitate because I have messed up the threads of the ongoing discussion there:

Best Regards, Barbara (WVS)   23:45, 12 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your input on the Vagina talk page. The references listed above are meant to support the content regarding the different cell types that make up the vaginal epithelium. I don't think any of them have anything to do with 'keratinization'. Sorry for the confusion. The discussion became so long that it was difficult to sort out the comments regarding the cell types from 'kerantinization'. I do believe that this is the longest talk page discussion that I've participated in that centered around the prefix 'non'. Best Regards, Barbara (WVS)   13:02, 13 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you

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Thank you for your edits to Vagina. This article is being reviewed for GA status. The talk page contains numerous discussions about content and referencing. Most of the discussions are between two editors (me and another) and consensus can be difficult to establish. Any input you feel would be helpful is greatly appreciated. A third opinion is always helpful and more objective. Best Regards, Barbara (WVS)   09:58, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

You're welcome! I don't see the article listed at WP:GAN. Anyway, good luck with the review. Axl ¤ [Talk] 10:18, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Ah, I see the section on the talk page involving SilkTork. Axl ¤ [Talk] 10:21, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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I'm pretty sure you deserve this and hope that you don't mind being recognized for your 'peace-making efforts'. Best Regards, Barbara (WVS)   22:37, 10 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, Barbara! Axl ¤ [Talk] 10:34, 11 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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Lion

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Hello. Would you be able to do a source review for lion? See the talk page. LittleJerry (talk) 14:16, 17 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Is the source check going okay? LittleJerry (talk) 17:46, 5 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, but it is time-consuming. Perhaps give me another week? Axl ¤ [Talk] 18:04, 6 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, also do you know anyone that can do a copyedit? LittleJerry (talk) 00:57, 7 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Unsourced BLP, to be removed.Xx236 (talk) 11:10, 24 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Wow! Feel free to take it to Speedy or AfD. Axl ¤ [Talk] 11:37, 24 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your endorsement

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Hello Axl. Thank you for endorsing our grant application. Your comments are valuable and helpful! In this vein can we phrase our sentence like you suggested - that was indeed our intended meaning. Ear-phone (talk) 13:01, 1 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Nomination of Bolsomito 2K18 for deletion

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"Of course I have objection to userfication..." I feel you meant to put a "no" into that. SpinningSpark 15:38, 19 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Oops! Axl ¤ [Talk] 15:40, 19 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi Axl, I note from your userpage that you have a special interest in pulmonology but that you don't routinely do GAN reviews anymore. I have done a GA review for the Hemothorax page, but as a cardiac electrophyiologist this isn't my specialist area and I have asked for a 2nd opinion. User:David notMD has kindly agreed to help with this but acknowledges that he is not an expert in pulmonology either. How would you feel about breaking your usual rule and taking a quick glance at the page for overall factual accuracy? - the more gnomic work is already being tackled. Thanks, PeaBrainC (talk) 19:17, 28 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Happy First Edit Day!

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Thank you! Axl ¤ [Talk] 08:30, 4 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Thank you. Axl ¤ [Talk] 16:38, 4 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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FAC source review

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Hello. would you be able to do a source spotcheck for wolf? Thank you. LittleJerry (talk) 18:21, 24 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It looks like "Wolf" isn't currently at FAC, but I guess you want me to help before you submit it. Sure, I'll take a look. Axl ¤ [Talk] 13:36, 27 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Actually, it is at FAC. It has 5 supports. I just need a random look at a few sources that you can access. LittleJerry (talk) 19:09, 27 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Ah, okay. Should I copy my comments from the article's Talk page across to the FAC page? Axl ¤ [Talk] 20:57, 27 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I made the corrections, so you could start over. LittleJerry (talk) 21:13, 27 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I guess I just need a source review for just reliability and formatting, not a spotcheck for accuracy. LittleJerry (talk) 14:54, 5 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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Orangutan FAC

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Hello. I hope to bring Orangutan to FAC. I had made it a GA years ago and since then more information has been added by others. I trust they are most reliable but just in case, could you please do a spot check of sources you can access? Thank you. LittleJerry (talk) 23:08, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Upcoming FAC nomination

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Hi Axl. I see that you're a member of Wikiproject Role Playing Games. In about a week, I'll be nominating Hyborian War for it's second FAC nomination. Improvements are complete and it's getting a peer review now. However, I'm concerned that it'll sit unreviewed when nominated as it's kind of a niche topic. Would you mind reviewing it when it posts? Would be happy to advise you when it's ready, if so. Thanks for your time. Airborne84 (talk) 06:16, 31 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

FAC review of Biblical criticism two years ago

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In October of 2018 you graciously participated in a FAC review of Biblical criticism. Unfortunately, I was going through the end stages of a long period of harassment and couldn't quite focus, then left WP altogether before the FAC was completed. The person that harassed me has since been banned from WP, as I was not the only person they harassed, so after a year and a half's absence, and some encouragement from some of the other exceptional editors on WP, I have come back to this wonderful place--and Biblical criticism.

I have spent the last month going over every reference in the entire article. I removed extra references and narrowed down pages so they are easier to find and I believe they are all completely accurate: what the text says the reference says is what the reference says. I have tightened and polished and added some content and deleted some other. I believe it reflects that 'professional' standard that FA looks for now. I wouldn't be ashamed to have submitted it as a research paper in grad school.

I would really love for you to take a look at it with the idea of renominating it for FA. I think it's an important article--if how many times it's content has been copied since I wrote it is any indication--it is. Please consider it. Your opinion is valued. Thank you so much, Jenhawk777 (talk) 05:19, 21 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

If you looked at it and ran the copyvio detector, you found a violation from [2] but I assure you that is a backwards violation. I have pinged two computer gurus here AlanM1 and PaleoNeonate for help in proving that, and if they are able, I know they will help because they are the best people anywhere, but until then, all I can do is show that the detector did not detect this website at any time before today--because it wasn't there. The person who published it wrote a date of 2010 on the front page, but that's untrue. Biblical criticism has been repeatedly checked for copyright violations since 2017, and it never previously detected this article. I have run the copyvio almost daily, sometimes more than once in a day, since I found the first backwards violation. This would be the third backwards violation on this article! Is that normal? These last two appear to be from sites that sell things--I think Alan called them clickbait. They publish something people will click on in hopes of getting to reroute you to their 'coupons' and such. This one is a download that I am afraid to actually download it and see what it is as I don't know what it might do that I don't want. Please don't disqualify this article because of this. I am so distressed by this I don't know what to do. This article represents months of my work and none of it is plagiarized. Jenhawk777 (talk) 19:23, 23 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Just to keep everything together, here's what I wrote on my talk page: It's clearly a copy of the Wikipedia article. The first telltale sign is the presence of the footnote markers (e.g. "[17] : 20 [36]" on page 3). Another is page 7, at the bottom of which is all of the hatnotes from within the article, starting with "From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia. This article is about the academic treatment ..." and several "Main article:" hatnotes. If you download the PDF, open it with Adobe Reader (or Acrobat), and look at the document properties, it was created on 2020-09-03, just a couple weeks ago.. —[AlanM1 (talk)]— 01:59, 24 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I don't usually check articles for copyright violations. I am happy to accept the opinions of other editors who have investigated and affirm that the Wikipedia article does not contain copyrighted information. Axl ¤ [Talk] 17:11, 27 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Totally cool. I hope you will have the opportunity to look at it. A. Parrot said he will have time to check the references in October, so I am going to renominate after they have had time to do so. Any input from you would probably save me grief down the road, but if you want to wait till it's nominated I understand. Thank you again for all you contributed two years ago. Jenhawk777 (talk) 23:25, 28 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
It was recommended to me that I go back and ask those involved in the first FAC to come back and work on this one, so I went back looking for names, and that was when I really took in how much work you did with me on that first FAC. I feel like I owe you more gratitude that I ever expressed, but that I also owe you a personal apology for bailing like I did. I didn't stop to think about how it would impact anyone else, and I am so sorry for that. You were incredible, and I just tanked the whole thing. I'm sorry for being so selfish and insensitive. I'm ashamed. I know! I'm such a girl, but I feel like I treated you shabbily. Please forgive me. And don't feel obligated to do anything else. Jenhawk777 (talk) 23:00, 19 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Er, I don't think that you owe me an apology at all. I am happy to help with improving the article (and hopefully bring it to FA status). However I am limited by the time that I have available. Anyway, I shall do what I can to help at the FAC. Axl ¤ [Talk] 18:47, 20 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I do. You did so much work and it all went to naught. Thank you for your continued willingness to help others anyway. Jenhawk777 (talk) 20:03, 20 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Morgagni hernia

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Axl, per your pulmonology expertise, have you any interest in helping me write Morgagni hernia? I am not thinking of NOW, rather after we get into the dead of winter and I am bored as an oyster, still stuck at home per COVID. I have several good journal reviews, and think we can do much better than the few sentences now at congenital diaphragmatic hernia. My son, in his mid-30s, recently had surgery for a Larrey-Morgagni hernia, extremely rare, and it was surprising to find that there is practically no information about it anywhere on the Internet, and fortunately I am comfortable reading journal articles. When he was first diagnosed, I did not even realize it fell under the pulmonology specialty, so wasted a lot of time figuring out who to consult (my son lives overseas). I'd like to have Wikipedia provide something for the rest of the world! If you are interested, perhaps we could tackle it in January or so ... SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:44, 13 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, Sandy. I hope that your son is okay. Yes, I am certainly happy to help you with this. Let me know when you're ready. Axl ¤ [Talk] 18:53, 13 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Will do! My son seems to have come through fine, and is now back overseas and at work; the whole thing has been quite a mystery, since he was a very healthy baby and is an extremely fit adult, totally asymptomatic. Best, SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:40, 13 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Cool. :-) Axl ¤ [Talk] 21:03, 13 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Hehe, thank you. :-) Axl ¤ [Talk] 12:50, 4 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you

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I was just reading some of the exchange on Biblical criticism's review and I got to feeling overwhelmingly grateful for you and your dependable showing up, calm presence and good humor. Thank you for doing this and most of all thank you for not making a sometimes difficult process harder. You're clear and reasonable and not unnecessarily mean about it. Thank you, and I really mean it. I just needed to say it. Jenhawk777 (talk) 20:08, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I have profound respect for editors like you who tirelessly work without pay to improve Wikipedia and provide a free educational resource for everyone. This especially noteworthy at FAC where a nominator can easily be attacked by multiple critics. I know what it's like to be on your side of the FAC process. On an article that I had spent nine months writing, I still remember one critic who wrote "The History section is a joke." And everyone's a critic, right? It is too easy to criticize, and nominators can easily become demoralized. So I try to keep my criticism constructive, and I try to help the nominator where I can. Axl ¤ [Talk] 12:10, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
You succeed, and it does not go unnoticed. Jenhawk777 (talk) 06:05, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Precious anniversary

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Biblical criticism

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Axl I don't know if you know but someone is complaining about the length of this FAC. If you can see anything that can be removed to the Talk page, it would really help. I'm sorry to bother you with this. Jenhawk777 (talk) 21:40, 9 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Tammar wallaby

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Hello. Would you be able to help me update the science section on that tammar article with more recent studies? A lot of papers on the use of it as a model organism is very technical. LittleJerry (talk) 21:18, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, LittleJerry. I am rather busy, but I shall try to make some time for this. Axl ¤ [Talk] 10:57, 4 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

DVT peer review

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Greetings Axl, I have placed DVT up for peer review at Wikipedia:Peer review/Deep vein thrombosis/archive4. If you are available to comment, I would appreciate your feedback. Best wishes. Biosthmors (talk) 15:40, 25 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Lung cancer scheduled for TFA

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Hippo paper

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Hello. I need help understanding and breaking down this paper. What does this quote mean?

"Our observations indicate that the hippopotamus is likely to be a bihemispheric sleeper that expresses REM sleep. The novel features of the cholinergic system suggest the presence of an undescribed sleep state in the hippopotamus, as well as the possibility that this animal could, more rapidly than other mammals, switch cortical electroencephalographic activity from one state to another.". LittleJerry (talk) 21:22, 19 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Both hemispheres of the brain go to sleep at the same time. This is the case for most mammals. However many aquatic mammals are notable exceptions and have unihemispheric sleep.
The second statement implies that hippos might have a form of sleep that has not previously been observed in mammals, although this is somewhat speculative.
The last statement implies that they might be able to transition between different phases of sleep more quickly than other mammals.
If you are thinking about using this source to support a statement in the article "Hippopotamus", I suggest something like "The hippopotamus has bihemispheric sleep (both hemispheres of the brain sleep at the same time). Despite this, it is able to sleep while submerged, and can intermittently float to the surface to breathe while still asleep." Axl ¤ [Talk] 02:10, 20 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Electric eel hemoglobin

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Hi. Would you be able to break this down for me? Thanks.

"The blood of the Electric Eel contains only one hemoglobin component. The primary structures of the alpha- and beta-chains are presented. These were separated by high-performance liquid chromatography, using a new kind of buffer system. The alpha-chains are acetylated, and consist of 142 residues, while the beta-chains are not blocked, and consist of 147 residues."

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/2713104/ LittleJerry (talk) 13:51, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, LittleJerry. Sentence 1 means that the blood only has one type of haemoglobin. (In humans, adults have two types of haemoglobin: HbA and HbA2. However human fetuses and infants have a different type of haemoglobin.) The paper describes the technique used to sequence the amino acids of the eel's haemoglobin. I don't think that there is anything here worth adding to Wikipedia's article "Electric eel". Perhaps at most, you might say that the eel's haemoglobin amino acid residues have been sequenced. Axl ¤ [Talk] 07:03, 26 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Happy Eighteenth First Edit Day!

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Happy First Edit Day!

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Always precious

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Ten years ago, you were found precious. That's what you are, always. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:06, 17 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! Axl ¤ [Talk] 12:13, 17 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Help summarizes these article

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Hello, could you help me break down these two articles?

Thank you. LittleJerry (talk) 21:34, 11 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The first paper shows that during the dry season, the lizards have reduced activity and reduced metabolic rate, which is in keeping with the reduced availability of food. Axl ¤ [Talk] 13:42, 12 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The second paper shows that passive movement of the body has no effect on gas exchange in these lizards. (I don't think that this is useful for Wikipedia's articles.) Axl ¤ [Talk] 13:46, 12 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Good article reassessment for Economic development in India

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A kitten for you!

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link me some anti-chron and maybe we can do this better? yeah sure, I did some drugs last night--BUT what was lost has now been found. My pocket, that is. Amazing that that can actually be lost; and I thought I was the clown.

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I have no idea what this message means, but thank you for the kitten. :-) Axl ¤ [Talk] 22:27, 7 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Dinosaur larynx

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This text is from Pinacosaurus. It is about 99 percent copied from the source. Would you be able to paraphase it better? Thanks. LittleJerry (talk) 22:49, 7 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

"The preserved larynx as revealed by their examinations, is composed of a cricoid and arytenoid like in non-avian reptiles, but is simultaneously specialized with the firm and kinetic cricoid-arytenoid joint, a prominent arytenoid process, a long arytenoid, and an enlarged cricoid as a possible vocal modifier like in birds. The structure was also ossified, suggesting that some non-avian dinosaur groups like ankylosaurids had ossified larynxes." LittleJerry (talk) 22:49, 7 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The larynx was comprised of cricoid and arytenoid cartilages, similar to those of non-avian reptiles. However its mobile cricoid-arytenoid joint and long arytenoid cartilages would have enabled easy opening of the glottis, thus allowing air-flow control similar to that of birds. Also, the cartilages were ossified, implying that laryngeal ossification is a feature of some non-avian dinosaurs. Axl ¤ [Talk] 16:48, 8 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I have changed the text of the article. Axl ¤ [Talk] 16:54, 8 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. Don't humans also have cricoid and arytenoid cartilages? That is, it is more accurate to say that the structure of the cartilages of the dinosaur is like non-avian reptiles? LittleJerry (talk) 20:54, 8 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Humans do have cricoid and arytenoid cartilages. However the paper states "The larynx of Pinacosaurus is composed of the cricoid and arytenoid like non-avian reptiles." It doesn't say that the structure of the cartilages is like non-avian dinosaurs. (Although I suspect that the structure is also similar.) Axl ¤ [Talk] 21:31, 10 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Ladybug article

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How could I paraphrase the abstract of this article? Thanks again. LittleJerry (talk) 23:19, 5 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Something like: "The ladybird pupa secretes poisons that deter potential predators." I don't think that a Wikipedia article needs more details. Axl ¤ [Talk] 21:54, 6 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Lung cancer

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Hi, Axl! Ajpolino is getting to close to wrapping up at lung cancer, and it would be wonderful to have your feedback. I'm doing a happy dance that your work will be saved! SandyGeorgia (Talk) 22:10, 25 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Elephant trunk

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Hello. Could you paraphase this statement? Thank you.

"...the trunk tip velocity obeys a power law with its path curvature, similar to human hand drawing movements." LittleJerry (talk) 01:34, 2 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

How about: "The tip of the trunk can be moved in a way similar to the human hand." Axl ¤ [Talk] 16:30, 3 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks is there a better way to state this? "transport of objects involves the proximal propagation of an inward curvature front initiated at the tip". LittleJerry (talk) 18:46, 4 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Objects grasped by the end of the trunk can be moved to the mouth by curving the trunk inwards. Axl ¤ [Talk] 19:24, 4 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Lung cancer scheduled for TFA

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As per this discussion, I've had to make a late substitution for July 5, and the consensus appears to be to rerun Lung cancer, see Wikipedia:Today's featured article/July 1, 2023. I hope that's OK. I've rewritten the blurb to comply with current formatting and length, but you are welcome to make amendments.

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Polar bear thermoregulation

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What's a good way to summarize this abstract? LittleJerry (talk) 21:40, 4 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

"Polar bears maintain their core body temperature at about 36.9°C." I don't think that the other details are relevant to a general encyclopedia. Axl ¤ [Talk] 19:24, 5 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Axl, could you also help summarize this abstract? LittleJerry (talk) 18:40, 14 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Maximum corticosteroid-binding capacity of corticosteroid-binding globulin in polar bear serum correlates with stress in polar bears, and this has increased with climate warming. Axl ¤ [Talk] 20:33, 14 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Koala teeth

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What's a way to paraphase this in laymen's terms? Thank you.

"forward displacement of the palate, enlargement of the occlusal surface of the molar teeth, thickening of the maxillae above the toothrow with resultant lowering of the occlusal plane of the cheekteeth relative to the glenoid fossa, and a decrease in the size of the pterygoid fossae" LittleJerry (talk) 01:01, 12 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

How about this: "the palate moves forward, enlargement of the grinding surfaces of the molar teeth, thickening of the bone above the upper teeth, and lower position of the molar teeth relative to the jaw joint". I didn't include the decreased size of the pterygoid fossa. I can't think of a layman's way to describe this. Axl ¤ [Talk] 16:26, 12 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

DYK for Ophidascaris robertsi

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On 22 October 2023, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article Ophidascaris robertsi, which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that in June 2022, a neurosurgeon found a roundworm in someone's brain? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Ophidascaris robertsi. You are welcome to check how many pageviews the nominated article or articles got while on the front page (here's how, Ophidascaris robertsi), and the hook may be added to the statistics page after its run on the Main Page has completed. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.

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Human vs ape heart articles

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Can you help me summarize These articles? Thank you. LittleJerry (talk) 04:43, 3 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The first paper: compared to the chimpanzee and gorilla lineages, the human lineage has evolved to perform moderate-intensity endurance physical activities more effectively. This includes adaptations of the human heart that increase stroke volume and cardiac output. Axl ¤ [Talk] 11:29, 4 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The second paper: compared to other great apes, humans tend to have a higher total energy expenditure. This requires a high cardiac output. When adjusted for body mass, the diameter of the aorta in humans is proportionately larger than the aortas of other great apes. This contributes towards increasing cardiac output. Axl ¤ [Talk] 11:36, 4 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Crocodile jaw muscles

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What a better way to put "The powerful jaw muscles are all on the median aspect of the mandible, thus broading the posterior skull." [3] LittleJerry (talk) 23:18, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hmm, I'm not sure what they mean by "median". I suppose that it should mean the symphysis in the midline, but perhaps they really mean "medial" (the inner surface of the mandible)? In either case, I don't see how presence of powerful jaw muscles there would cause broadness of the posterior skull. Axl ¤ [Talk] 08:15, 18 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]