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Feedback November 2023

Hi all. I’m a budding Wikipedian so I will share more feedback and less large editing for now. A lot of this article reads as a resume, and the lack of citations makes a lack of context for the significance of each statement in a sea of statements. It currently sounds like “he did this and then he did this and then and then”, forever, indiscriminately. It could explain more about what makes the music he produces unique. Tell the reader why they need to care or learn more about this musician and how he has enhanced the field of music.

Trim the lead from so many dates and specific albums, to a more bold and direct and hard-hitting list of career highlights, and uniquely interesting facts to catch attention. How many albums, how many are platinum, how many collaborators or the list of the top collaborators like U2. Add the NYT statement of his philosophy, or the top world class statements that have been made about him.

More about his personal life, inspirations, musical education, and motivation would greatly enhance this article. I want to know more about how he developed his style. Where did he get the funds to begin producing? How did he go from mere college student to getting people to listen to his remixed music in college? What was his childhood like, did it affect his desire to make music? Then follow up with more information about his current life other than merely what he is producing. TheFactFairy (talk) 03:28, 18 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]